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What are modifiers? How do they function in sentences?
Modifiers are words, phrases, and clauses that affect and often enhance the meaning
of a sentence. Modifiers offer detail that can make a sentence more engaging, clearer,
or specific. The simplest form of a modifier would be an adjective or adverb. But
again, modifiers can come in the form of phrases and clauses that
act like adjectives
and adverbs.
What are some examples of the types of modifiers that writers use?
Adjectival clause (acts as an adjective)
My sister,
who is an engineer
, works next door
.
“who is an engineer,” the
dependent clause
(one that cannot stand alone; an
incomplete thought), describes (or modifies) the noun “sister.”
Adjectival clauses usually begin with a relative pronoun (that, which, who, whom,
whose) or a relative adverb (where, when, why).
Adverbial clause (acts as adverb)
Because I was so tired
, I went to bed.
“Because I was so tired” describes the action of “going to bed.”
A trick: adverb clauses usually answer the
how
,
when
, and
why
of actions.
Why
did
I go to bed?
Because I was so tired.
Adverbial clauses usually begin with subordinating conjunctions.
Time
: after, when, until, soon, before,
Condition
: if, whether or not, provided, in case, unless
Cause and effect: because, as, since, so, in order that, now that, inasmuch as
Contrast: though, although, while, whereas, even though
Modifiers
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Modifiers
Demonstratives
this
year
; these
people
; that
car
;
back in
those
days
Demonstratives point to particular nouns.
Near or far? “this” and “these” refer to “near” nouns; “that” and “those” refer to
“far” nouns.
Come before the noun they modify.
Possessive adjectives/determiners
my
paper
; their
happiness
; your
dog
; his, her, its, our.
Usually used in front of a noun to express possession.
Possessive pronouns (
mine, yours, his, hers, theirs, ours
) are related, but they
usually come after the noun they are expressing possession of. Example:
The lunch
is mine.
Prepositional phrase
The people
in the audience
roared with laughter
.
“in the audience” adds further meaning to “the people.”
Prepositional phrases often answer
how
or
why
nouns are related to other words in
the sentence. In this example, the phrase answers
why
“people” are roaring with
laughter, because they are “in the audience,” presumably of some hilarious comedy
show.
What are some common errors when using modifiers?
Because modifiers can exist in the form of groups of words—phrases and clauses—it is
easy to misplace them in writing. Just like adjectives and adverbs need to be in the
correct location with respect to the nouns and verbs they modify, adjectival and
adverbial clauses, prepositional phrases, and other modifiers need to be placed such
that they correctly modify their intended words/groups of words.
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Modifiers
Below are four common errors writers make when using modifiers.
Dangling modifier
After watching the movie,
the book still seems better
.
The adverbial phrase “after watching the movie” incorrectly modifies “the book.”
This doesn’t make sense since a book cannot watch a movie. The modifier is
dangling because the word it is supposed to modify—the name of or pronoun for
the person who watched the movie—is not there.
A correction: After watching the movie,
he still thinks
the book is better
.
Misplaced modifier
Joe thought about throwing a party for his dad
while he walked in the park.
As it is, this sentence says that Joe thought about throwing the party while his dad
walked in the park. That doesn’t make sense—his dad wouldn’t be there—and it is
unclear.
The modifier “while he walked in the park” is misplaced. Is it referring to Joe or his
dad?
A correction:
While he walked in the park,
Joe thought about throwing a party for
his dad.
Ambiguous (squinting modifiers)
Explaining your premises
clearly
enhances your argument
.
In this sentence, “clearly” could modify “explaining your premises,” as in explaining
them
clearly
, or it could modify “enhances your argument,” as in
clearly
enhancing
it.
A correction: Explaining your premises
will clearly
enhance your argument
.
