ACCUPLACER WritePlacer ESL Guide with Sample Essays © 2021 College Board.
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Score of 2
Description of Score of 2
An essay in this category demonstrates limited competency in the elements of
on-demand essay writing in English.
The writing sample exhibits rudimentary development of ideas with an inconsistent ability
to express ideas clearly in an organized pattern or with sucient supporting details.
The writing sample exhibits inconsistent competency in word use incorporating
commonly used words and word phrases. Frequent errors in word selection, word
forms, and spelling often obscure meaning.
The writing sample exhibits inconsistent control of sentence use with some
evidence of control of simple sentences. Commas and periods may be used to
mark sentence boundaries, although there are many errors. Minimal attempts to
coordinate sentences and to use subordinate clauses may be evident. Errors in
grammatical forms are numerous.
Below are sample essays that received a score of 2. The annotations explain why the
essay received the indicated score.
Sample Essay #1 – Score of 2
If I would receive a large sum of money,that lots of things I want to do. As a
student, I want to get more and more knowledge and look around the world,so I
wish I can study abroad,to know dierent culture of some countries,that I must
need a large sum of money to support my study plan!
Of course $25 million are a large sum of money, except help me to study plan,I could
do other things. I think many people will use these money to buy cars,houses,...and
so on,but I don’t agree with these are good ideas. If you only use money but don’t
make more and more money,that one day,most of your money will be spent out. I
have a future plan. I would nd a company,at the rst it must a developing company
and it have a huge developing space. That I will use my money to give it some help. In
the future when I have nished my study plan,I think I could get more money and use
these money,maybe I can build a company by myslef. I’m not only see one $25 million!
In fact,I always consider the money is a tool,it used to help me to get my each
purpose. I’m a person,my life is the “running”. When I make out a dream,soon I
have a next dream. At the last you will nd that you get your dream,the money
only is a number! I think I will give all of my money to many poor ares in the
world,use my power to help as more as possible people get their dreams.
Annotations
This writing sample demonstrates rudimentary development of ideas and
inconsistent competency in word use (I’m a person,my life is the “running” . . . .
At the last you will nd that you get your dream,the money only is a number!). The
rst body paragraph contains an attempt to focus on the writer’s plan to invest
the inheritance in a “developing company”; however, the explanation contains
frequent errors in word selection and word forms that often obscure meaning (Of
course $25 million are a large sum of money, except help me to study plan, I could
do other things). Commas and periods are used to mark sentence boundaries,
but there are many errors (As a student, I want to get more and more knowledge
and look around the world,so I wish I can study abroad,to know dierent culture of
some countries, that I must need a large sum of money to support my study plan!).
Exhibiting limited competency in the elements of on‐demand essay writing in
English, this writing sample receives a score of 2.